the phoniest of flattery
the most lascivious of lies
the cacophony of coquettish ramblings:
all are the plights of an unreciprocated obsession,
not born out of love, but of rabidly ill intent.
~ Sammicakes
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Sammicakes 
Been a long time I seen the word cacophony used. Poetry yunno
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I learned that word from a song when I was a kid and never let go of it!
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I knew there was an amazing origin story 😄
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lol, big thanks to marina and the diamonds :))
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Wow!! I felt that!
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so glad you liked it ❤
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This is amazing Sammi, Beautifully deep
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thank you ❤
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My pleasure 🌼
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Incredible piece!wow!!! Very raw and descriptive wordplay.
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thank you so much !!
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Obsession is that road to madness, isn’t it? Sometimes, I think, that not towards pure obsession, though simply upon its road, we are going towards that madness, being love. If it is our goal to be obsessive, and get nowhere by it, then yes, it is all ill-intent. Though, to be obsessive on the path, itself, is to be led to the madness we should know is love.
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very true, that’s some good insight on the other perspective of obsession and love. let’s just say it’s never worked out very well for me! thank you for this!
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Alliteration and the rhythm of this poem was perfect, like an enchanting song, creeping to your heart. I love it really much~
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I had a lot of fun playing around with words to get that perfect sound, glad you enjoyed !!
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❤ Must be hard to find the perfect words, I guess, though?
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it took me ten minutes to find the right spelling of “lascivious!” aha, worth it though :))
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Ah, poetry can be really tough, isn’t it? But in the end, your poem does sound so perfect~!
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you’re exactly right, thank you again!!
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The pleasure’s all mine, have a great day/night ahead ❤
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Amazing 💛💛 felt that ♥️
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thanks for checking it out <33
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